5 Haiku
five
H
a
i
k
u
.
At the simplest level, haiku are verse about nature and humanity,
written
in a 5-7-5 syllable pattern, while senryu are haiku-like verse, not
necessarily about nature, not necessarily in that pattern.
However,
even many traditional Japanese poets did not follow the 5-7-5
pattern for
what they nevertheless called haiku. Furthermore, Japanese
syllables are
based on the consonants that surround each vowel, and have no
direct
parallel in English.
Since the Japanese view of nature may be
impossibly foreign to the American view of the world anyway, simply
imitating the form and content of traditional Japanese ideas about
haiku
may be the least practical approach for modern non-Japanese haiku
writers.
So while I have focused most of my own haiku/senryu
around
nature and the seasons, I realize that the culture in which I work
makes
the creation of "true" haiku impossible. Personally, I see haiku
as
transmitters of the smallest manageable element of insight. It is
because
these most basic elements of thought are part of a larger web that
even a
casual stroll through the garden of words can bring with it the
awareness
of things cosmic. Above all rely on your five senses to convey your
ideas. Make the reader hear, see, smell, taste, touch your ideas; don't
tell, show, demonstrate, illustrate, be sensory.